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maryjaneguitargurl
10-21-2004, 07:02 AM
"A Glitch"

The sea waves
The music plays
The ground falls
The bird calls
They aren't in pain
Insane to sane
Hand to Hand
Black and White
Sit by me the starry black night.

peace
chickens

kidder
10-21-2004, 03:17 PM
Try:
Hand to hand
Black and white
Sit with me
This starry night...

Scrap the rest and add to these promising lines! You can do it and now get down to it! And no ******* excuses!

maryjaneguitargurl
10-21-2004, 10:15 PM
Oh i typoed haha.> Thanks for all your encouragment to my poems


peace
chickens