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weaselpop
10-20-2004, 08:01 PM
New things excite, if
Only for a moment, it's
Worth a thousand cows.
weaselpop
10-22-2004, 10:20 AM
:p
MattInVegas
10-22-2004, 09:51 PM
New things excite, if
Only for a moment, it's
Worth a thousand cows.
Haiku usually has 5 lines. But, I liked it.
I wish the one in my hrad was more insistant on beieg written. It's about friendship.
sunflowerAlys
10-22-2004, 10:08 PM
eh? a haiku usually has 5 lines??? not the way ive been taught. 3 lines- first with 5 syllables, second with 7, third and last with 5 again.
sylvanlightning
10-23-2004, 06:10 AM
Fun, fun, all smiles here. Good job.
weaselpop
01-16-2005, 07:16 PM
Ha! I did it right! :)
Moonjava
01-17-2005, 02:54 AM
yeah, it's definitely 3 lines, but i don't see why you coulnd't (and shouldn't) add more if ya want to! Good Haiku, btw.