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marcella312001
10-20-2004, 05:41 PM
I can not stay, and yet I can not walk away.
My heart is torn between the things I should
and should not say.
My world is stone, my heart is weak,
my soul yearns for desire so sweet.
I reach for you, you turn away.
They reach for me, I can not stay.

kidder
10-20-2004, 06:31 PM
A kind of sad, mellow ending- like it! Keep at it- you're doing fine!

marcella312001
10-20-2004, 08:47 PM
Thank you kidder