Hidden Glade

[marcella312001]

Hidden glade
Raptures night
our passions join
in forbidden flight.
your lips on mine
our souls on fire
passion buiding
HIGHER
HIGHER
Our body's join
in passions dance
our inhibitions
have no chance!

[marcella312001]

I wrote this for a guy I met on the internet what do you think?

[sylvanlightning]

I've read it a couple times and find it very sensual. The one word I keep getting distracted by is 'forbidden'... just me, 'ecstatic' seems to restore the flow. Thank you for sharing.