Happy?

[Butch]

So much more
Is this what you long for?
How much do you have?

You could have less
Happy still?
I hope so

You could have more
Happier?
Not really

Happy with nothing?
Of course

Happy with death?
Yes
I am ready but happy not to rush

[ryupower]

*claps*

[kidder]

I think the last three lines deviate from the thrust of the poem. I'd boot 'em. Now, stick with your strength here- a testy, inferred dialogue with your sweetie. It's a great readaloud.