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Applespark
10-20-2004, 02:01 AM
When clouds part

Like lips

Sky breaths

A new sunlight

Births

A Rainbow

Captures me

A first bloom

Of Fall

The mouth closes

I open mine

To taste
The rain

KittenX
10-20-2004, 02:31 AM
Delicious piece of the sky.

sylvanlightning
10-20-2004, 05:56 AM
I love tasting the rain.

First bloom of fall... is such a beautiful image.

Icurus
10-20-2004, 09:04 PM
So sweet Applespark, how you incorporate Nature with
Us (Humans) and why not, we're part of it as well, very nice,
and some what passionate.
Your old friend, Devon Knight / Icurus

helen-maple
10-22-2004, 12:45 AM
beautiful.
i like the simplicity.
thank you.

Applespark
10-22-2004, 01:05 AM
Thanks everyone :)