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Applespark
10-20-2004, 02:01 AM
When clouds part
Like lips
Sky breaths
A new sunlight
Births
A Rainbow
Captures me
A first bloom
Of Fall
The mouth closes
I open mine
To taste
The rain
KittenX
10-20-2004, 02:31 AM
Delicious piece of the sky.
sylvanlightning
10-20-2004, 05:56 AM
I love tasting the rain.
First bloom of fall... is such a beautiful image.
Icurus
10-20-2004, 09:04 PM
So sweet Applespark, how you incorporate Nature with
Us (Humans) and why not, we're part of it as well, very nice,
and some what passionate.
Your old friend, Devon Knight / Icurus
helen-maple
10-22-2004, 12:45 AM
beautiful.
i like the simplicity.
thank you.
Applespark
10-22-2004, 01:05 AM
Thanks everyone :)
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