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mebesideme
10-19-2004, 06:05 AM
The Rose

Delicate,
From a slim green twig,
The morning dew drips;
A bud is born from the night’s chill.
The morning rays warm and beckon
And little by little,
This symbol for me opens.
Spreading its pedals,
Moist and fresh;
The scent is in my nose.
Placed in a vase;
It is beginning to wilt.
The rose reminded me
As it slowly died;
Time is passing,
No matter what.
I return to existence.
I threw her rose
From a moving window
In the night,
As love died
And I moved on.
The world beckons,
More lessons to learn.
The bush will be bare
Through the winter,
But my heart will heal
And bring spring to life;
Fresh blossoms into bloom.

sylvanlightning
10-19-2004, 06:30 AM
Thank you for this. Even when pricked by thorns, or made witness to decay, the essence and memories remain... and yes we blossom, anew. Etheric and luminous in our newness.

mebesideme
10-19-2004, 06:39 AM
<blush> Thank you!

littleskinny
10-22-2004, 09:59 PM
pedals should be petals, yes?

This was touching. Roses are sexy.

thaone0715
10-29-2004, 01:40 PM
yes, so true

Hippievixen
10-30-2004, 02:47 AM
I loved this one. Thanks for sharing!

Bhaskar
11-02-2004, 08:03 PM
Ever read Oscar Wilde's short story about the rose and the nightingale?

sunflowerAlys
11-03-2004, 04:40 PM
oh dear that was really nice thank you. there is hope after all

rainbowkid
11-03-2004, 05:45 PM
Yeah. Good use of imagery of the fresh awakening of morning.