Lucy & Molly

[Collideascope00s]

Lucy comes on to me like a wave of beautiful mystique,
Her vibrant colors disassociated with the rave but with my mind I dare not critque.
While Miss Molly rolls across my face and down my frame,
It is the feeling in this case that will leave tomorrow lame.
I speak to you of two girls so devine,
Each I make only mine.

Some call it candy tripping,
Others don't know what they're missing.

But for you who know what I speak of,

This union I call love.


(Sorry, heh had a random spurt of needed creation. Extremely rough draft hardly even proof read... So bare with me)

[mrs_hendrix]

Wow! I don't think any apology on your behalf is needed! This is what writing true poetry is about, letting the words flow freely :D

Very beautiful

[NightRose]

"This union I call love."

I thought that said 'onion' when I first read it... heh

Very good colli :) It's fun to rhymn