messed up....

[OceanStar]

This expresses how I feel rite now after an awful nite. Please excuse if its shite but I'm pissed...lol
.....

I told his lyes for him.
Those browns eyes, burning with fire in the dim.
The truth flows like vodka rivers and I fear the pavements I must meet.
What will happen? What will come of this?
Will you hunt me? Will you beat me?
Will I ever be free?
I'm too scared to trust,
to lie back and just be....
so I pour and I pour,
so much more....


:(

[rambleON]

ocean star liner. do you where eyeliner.

ps. do you know about beat poetry now.

[weaselpop]

So are you looking for feedback or just throwing your drunken adolescent feelings into the digital ether and hoping for... what?

ps. I have total respect for adolescent adolescent feelings

[OceanStar]

ocean star liner. do you where eyeliner.
.

Haha yeah lots!

Yeah I read that link you gave me and then just started reading ginsberg. So I really like this style of poetry...I'll be reading alot more of it I'd say...

Anyhoo yeah that poem I wrote really wasnt posted for any reason in particular. Wasnt looking for feedback it was just how I felt at the time and I just thought I'd put it out there with everyone elses thoughts and emotions!

Peace and love.:D