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[rainbowkid]

Slicing concrete with hair,
Starring, starring at what was there.
A painful mustard smell of dirt,
Reminds me of a hot, winters day.
A majestic laugh shuts everybody up.
Then the salt takes affect,
The wound bleeds, stop the rain.
Snap metal in my hands, the feather is too strong.
A love, hate relationship of minerals.
The fire is too hot but, the iceburg warmer,
Sip from the glass, not too much.
Starring, Starring at what was there.

[fulmah]

A painful mustard smell of dirt,
Reminds me of a hot, winters day.
I liked that image alot, as well as the "starring at what was there" repition, nice job, rainbowkid!

[rainbowkid]

Well Ive got more in a little booklet. If you want a copy for free I'll send it through to you in the post if you send me a pm with your address, it should be fine.

[littleskinny]

Hey Rainbowkid...what a great use of images - I was particularly fond of these lines/thoughts....





Slicing concrete with hair,

A painful mustard smell of dirt,

A majestic laugh shuts everybody up.

A love, hate relationship of minerals.

[KittenX]

I enjoyed the splendid little contradictions in this piece...

"Reminds me of a hot, winters day."

This piece is bursting with energy...