experience perfection

[*Heather*]

this style of poerty i havent really tried before. nothing rhymes, i just had a point that came across with rhythm. if you can tell me what you think, anything that can be better, dont be afraid to pick it to bits :) thankyou

Whisper of hope
In a dream of love
Reality of failure
In a world of hate

Hope we can do better
And love on another
With failure to dream
We hate to live

So give life a chance
Change your world
Learn to love
Remember to dream

Hope brings peace
Happiness brings freedom
So release yourself
Be yourself
And Experience perfection

[heeh2]

fucking beautiful poem

[The Instinct]

been awhile since I read someone else's poem in here, I liked it.