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opel diamond
10-20-2008, 07:21 PM
i just wrote this about 20 seconds ago. its not much but it meant something to my tangled mind. just thought i would share.


Existance

Two life forces collide,
Bang! Energy!
Chaos in a ruled world.
Sparks will fly
and tides will turn
and something will soon mean everything.

Pellinore
10-21-2008, 04:38 PM
I like this poem, says alot in little words. Awesome.

Spaced06
10-21-2008, 06:12 PM
I like it as well, very comunicative.

*Heather*
10-22-2008, 04:58 AM
i like teh last line, it says so much

stalk
10-22-2008, 05:00 AM
short and sweet :)

opel diamond
10-23-2008, 04:47 PM
thanks guys :)