my poem

[opel diamond]

i just wrote this about 20 seconds ago. its not much but it meant something to my tangled mind. just thought i would share.


Existance

Two life forces collide,
Bang! Energy!
Chaos in a ruled world.
Sparks will fly
and tides will turn
and something will soon mean everything.

[Pellinore]

I like this poem, says alot in little words. Awesome.

[Spaced06]

I like it as well, very comunicative.

[*Heather*]

i like teh last line, it says so much

[stalk]

short and sweet :)

[opel diamond]

thanks guys :)