Precious little boat.

[Pellinore]

My soul,
A mad sea,
twisted by commotion,
Unnatural gravitation,
of a foolish life.
Once more,
I set sail,
In the mad ocean,
Storms ravage,
my little boat.
Sinking to the bottom,
clinging onto the burried dreams.
My little precious boat,
sunken.
To the dephts of tears.

[TiedyeDreams]

It's good. Very well composed.

It sends off a very hopeless and desperate vibe.
Something many people can relate to at one point or another.

[opel diamond]

Pellinore, ive read a few of your poems you've posted here now and ive enjoyed them all a lot. keep writing :D

[Pellinore]

Thank you both, i appreciate it :).