WAVES AT JOSIE(this is a poetry thread btw)

[Lozi]

hello josie, welcome to this thread. lol. salutations all ye other earthlings that bear brains. to those who don't....peace be with you my friend.

i think a rendition of this rock tyoon will pacifiy or confuse some of your minds...enjoy...laff...or cry...whichever is good.

Crucify this Mindbrace

Crucify this Mindbrace

Millions of people that i want to see,
Too many places i'm longing to be,
How can you scream unevitable cry,
When you only feel numb, you're contented to sigh.
And at the end of time, i am going to die today.
Crucify this mindbrace.

Whining, arch stairway, has clustered me home,
But i'm waiting and watching the phone.
Pick up, pick up, let me hear your voice crack,
Where there's laughter to follow and no turning back.
And at the end of time, i am going to die today.
Crucify this mind brace.

Conference instead of this open air scream,
The fire ate the shadows of your football team,
A day only lasts and passes through the chair,
When you look in the mirror and see you're not there.
And at the end of time, i am going to die today.
Crucify this mind brace.




poetry is an art isn't it?....

[JOsie]

:Dshit me...that's really really good...

i really like the line "at the end of time i will die today"...i don't know why it just seems to tie the universe together...

[roly]

i remember reading this before .... did you post it on the main poetry forum....its amazing ...i love it very muchly...

Roly.xxx

P.S sorry to intrude....:&

[Lozi]

it's ok, this isn't a specifically josie thread lolop. just felt a need to wave at him really lol. yeah i may have posted that before on the main thread, can't remember. ho well. thanks for your comments :)