dying flowers

[inbloom]

i wrote this a few years, ago. just found it in my room a little while ago. sort of a joke poem...

dying flowers
makes me sad
makes me...write poetry
makes me eat dirt
tastes bad, i cry
for dying flowers
gone are roses, pansies
and lillies...
goodbye

haha, cuz i'm so lame. :p

[Lozi]

i like it, it sort of flows undescribibably.....and don't say it's lame coz one mans mutton is another mans....cheese. i think i meant people have assorted tastes. lol. its kind of a funeral dedication to flowersm more fun than 'The Sick Rose' by william blake.uh. yes, yours is mahoosive....

[inbloom]

glad you liked it, lozi!! haha, i just think it's a silly poem. i wrote it, and the "ode to frogs" after reading and laughin my ass off at the poems on the sifl and olly website. :p

[Lozi]

who are sifl and olly?

[fizzy_elf]

Arent they those socks who talk on MTV2?

I dont know. I'm English.

:p

[Lozi]

yeah, i'm english too. come tell us mr james sir, who be these fellows named sifl and olly?

[KittenX]

I liked the ode to frogs more:P

[inbloom]

sifl and olly are indeed the talking socks on MTV. their show fucking rooooooooooooooocked! i miss it so bad, i haven't seen it in years.

but here's their website: http://www.sifl-n-olly.com