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gdhmomchild
09-21-2004, 10:10 PM
ok, not my best but...seem to be a bit stuck lately...
Nothing more than a diamond in the rough
My value hidden thus
But if you hold me right,
and shine your light
you will see me and the value I hold.
You may just see another rock in your path
and walk on by,
without a try
sylvanlightning
09-21-2004, 11:40 PM
Its your light within, that illumines the poetic facets of this beautiful gem. Thank you for sharing.
KittenX
09-21-2004, 11:45 PM
We are all prisms.
I have felt, still feel this way too often. You've described it better then I could.
gdhmomchild
09-21-2004, 11:57 PM
Thank you both, all too kind. You both have brought me much pleasure by sharing your gems with me. Have to admit tho Kitten, that the times I was going to post to your thread,lol, I would loose track of the one I've wanted to make comment about. Hair flippy moments~pfffffft!~ Thanks again~*
KittenX
09-22-2004, 12:45 AM
Well I hope you come around my neighborhood sometime again gdh! :sunglasse
littleskinny
09-22-2004, 08:33 PM
That was poignant and effective. Good job indeed.
skyfire
09-23-2004, 06:14 AM
yes...i thought this was very good...i think a lot of ppl can relate to it...
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