I Need Weed!!!(POEM)

[TopNotchStoner]

Blue skies above
But all I see is rain
No happiness, no love
All I feel is pain
Nothing to hold onto
Nothing to keep me sane
No light at the end of the tunnel
I see no chance for change
I try to smile and laugh
But my efforts are in vain
I feel so lost and lonely
Without my Mary Jane:(

[Hamfoot]

awesome poem man, flows well :] and so true haha

[Hilder]

:( So true. good one.

[killswitchjd]

you suck (as I kick you in the balls)
detox ftw.... as long as I dont have to stop.

[TopNotchStoner]

Thanks Hilder and Hamfoot.

LOL @ killswitch. haha

[What??]

Nice poem man.

[skamikaze]

Thats awesome man! I take it you got inspired by Shel Siverstein Lately?

[thisisme5]

I didnt even realize that was his poem.. i thought he was just posting it... great poem man can i use that for my english class? (Changing the last line of course)

[TopNotchStoner]

I didnt even realize that was his poem.. i thought he was just posting it... great poem man can i use that for my english class? (Changing the last line of course)
hahaha It is my poem man. I was just sad as fuck and depressed about not having weed, so I decided to write a poem. I made it up while I was posting it, so it only took about 5 minutes to write it, which is why it may or may not seem like it was just "thrown together" quickly, because it was. lol You don't have to change the last line. Just tell your teacher that your girlfriend, Mary Jane, broke up with you. haha

[stalk]

definitely flows like johnny cash and silverstein ;]
I dig it, bro

[TopNotchStoner]

Thats awesome man! I take it you got inspired by Shel Siverstein Lately?hahaha nah man. I just like poetry. Plus, being without weed makes me depressed as fuck, and poetry is one of the best ways to convey emotions, so I wrote a quick poem about how I have been feeling, having no marijuana.

[TopNotchStoner]

Dank you kyndly, stalk:) That's a huge compliment:D

[stalk]

I've never been good at rhyming, or telling stories
and those guys are a HUGE inspiration for me
especially now that you brought silverstein back into my life.
It's been years!
Thank you.

[TopNotchStoner]

haha not a problem man. Everyone needs to read The Perfect High, whether they use drugs or not. It's just a cool poem. lol

[Subliminal89]

Yo, TopNotch! your tolerence will be down when you get some so that's always a plus! And that poem is awesome

[TopNotchStoner]

Yeah the thought of how stoned I'm gonna be when I smoke again brings a huge smile to my face:D It's only been a few weeks, but it feels like forever. lol

Thanks man.

[Charlisangel]

I feel your pain man.

[TopNotchStoner]

hahaha I knew someone would:(

[urbro]

lol nice poem

[Startreken]

I feel your pain man.

Man, I was going to say that! Oh, well. Nice poem. I used to write when I was in High School. I get it. Every once and a while I would go to coffee shop readings and read my stuff. It was fun. You should give it a shot.

[TopNotchStoner]

Thanks Dave. We went to some kind of coffee shop poetry lounge type of place in high school when we had to write poetry projects. I really don't like reading shit in front of people though, so I always skipped school on those days. haha

[Startreken]

You should totally try it. I hated going up at first. I would go with some friends, we had a good time. Write what you know man.

[Subliminal89]

Deep

[newradicalface]

That was very good, and I wish I could smoke whatever I have left with you dude

Might as well add the happy weed poem I just wrote into this thread :D

When I smoke on the greenery
I get all smiley and giggle
Scenery jumps out at me
My heart rate increases a little
The thoughts begin turning
From sadness to joy
Smoking marijuana is like a child's new toy
The ideas that come to me
When "high on the pot"
Are sometimes crazy, oftentimes lazy
But they are my stoned thoughts
And I like them a lot

[TopNotchStoner]

hahahahaha That's a good one dude:sifone:

[newradicalface]

Thanks :o

:sifone:

[SashaK]

haha i love it

[TopNotchStoner]

Roll, roll, roll your joint
Fill it up with weed
Twist it, hit it, light it
Then pass that shit to me
As I sit back
And begin to toke
I inhale really deep
Until I choke
I take a big hit
And hold that shit
Then I fill the room with a cloud of smoke:sifone:

[weedwhacker]

i feel exactly like you do, i didn't get any weed last weekend, and i might not get some this weekend either :(

ahh i almost forgot what its like to be high!?!

[TopNotchStoner]

I'll never forget what it's like to be high, but I HAVE forgotten what the munchies feel like. haha My appetite has been shitty as fuck lately.

[Hamfoot]

one heartfelt desire of mine that dances through the back of my mind,
is for a new perspective on how the summer's light appears to my eyes,
i long for a joyous warmth that soothes and brings me up to the sky,
and i long for that rush of excitement...
that moment only felt, when you're finally getting high :)

[TopNotchStoner]

That's good, Hamfoot. More "poetic" than my poetry. haha

[weedwhacker]

im liking the poems in this thread

all of them are very creative in their own ways. and i can relate to them because im so sad to be flat outta bud :(

[TopNotchStoner]

Being out of weed sucks big ol' donkey balls:(

[newradicalface]

Peering through the haze of marijuana smoke
I quickly located a lighter and continued to smoke
More and more went in the bowl
Till ash was all that it would hold
I inhaled with vigor, and the greens I did take
Shit man, I smoked a half 8th for wake and bake
6 bowls later, voices sound like Darth Vader
As things slow down to a sluggish pace
I see the huge grin plastered on my face
I want to share it with all
That super awesome feeling
That you are so high
YOu could fly right through the ceiling.

[Willy_Wonka_27]

Blue skies above
But all I see is rain
No happiness, no love
All I feel is pain
Nothing to hold onto
Nothing to keep me sane
No light at the end of the tunnel
I see no chance for change
I try to smile and laugh
But my efforts are in vain
I feel so lost and lonely
Without my Mary Jane:(
ive been playing this poem as a song on my mandolin.

AmBlue skies above
CBut all I see is rain
BmNo happiness, no love
DAll I feel Cmis pain

AmNothing to hold onto
CNothing to keep me sane
BmNo light at the end of the tunnel
DI see no chance Cmfor change

AmI try to smile and laugh
CBut my efforts are in vain
BmI feel so lost and lonely
DWithout my Mary CmJane

[TopNotchStoner]

Her eyes are bright green
She has beautiful red hair
And wears the sweetest perfume
I can smell it in the air
She brings joy into my life
I cannot live without her
I think it's safe to say
That I love everything about her
My sweet, sweet Mary
I've given you my heart
When we're together
It feels like heaven
But I'm in hell when we're apart

[TopNotchStoner]

ive been playing this poem as a song on my mandolin.

AmBlue skies above
CBut all I see is rain
BmNo happiness, no love
DAll I feel Cmis pain

AmNothing to hold onto
CNothing to keep me sane
BmNo light at the end of the tunnel
DI see no chance Cmfor change

AmI try to smile and laugh
CBut my efforts are in vain
BmI feel so lost and lonely
DWithout my Mary CmJanehahaha That's awesome dude. Make a recording and post it. haha

[BtownBlazer]

Nice poem man.

[LSDMIKE]

Look at it this way,the longer you go with out weed the more stoned your going to get when you do find some, anyway i'm off for a pipe :D

[Charlisangel]

one heartfelt desire of mine that dances through the back of my mind,
is for a new perspective on how the summer's light appears to my eyes,
i long for a joyous warmth that soothes and brings me up to the sky,
and i long for that rush of excitement...
that moment only felt, when you're finally getting high :)


THAT was realy good.

God I miss geting high,wish me luck on my weed hunt today...

[Hamfoot]

thanks man!
good luck on the hunt :)

[TopNotchStoner]

I can't wait to light a spliff
Then take a toke and drift
To a place much more peaceful
And much happier than this
Where sorrow is no more
And sadness turns to bliss
That wonderful moment in time
When pain ceases to exist
When everything in life
Seems to make perfect sense
A smile comes to my face
And I feel complete happiness:D

[weedwhacker]

I can't wait to light a spliff
Then take a toke and drift
To a place much more peaceful
And much happier than this
Where sorrow is no more
And sadness turns to bliss
That wonderful moment in time
When pain ceases to exist
When everything in life
Seems to make perfect sense
A smile comes to my face
And I feel complete happiness:D

*applauds*
bravo bravo

[TopNotchStoner]

hahaha Thanks dude. Have you gotten any weed yet?