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triangle_soul
09-18-2004, 07:43 PM
I see the way
you glane at me
It is at those
moments when
my eye's meet
yours, I feel
all your passion
rush into my soul.

I close my eye's
and I can
smell you
the wind just
carries your
energy right
into me
Like it has
always been there.

You are so fimilar to me
Like you have
alway's been
near me
I have always
known I would
have you.

And, oh those
blissful moments
when your
flesh touches
mine, deep inside
I can always
feel my inner
tissues wrapped
around yours
Just knowing
how your blood
is rushing
through you
makes me
constrict my
pleasure.

Chris, I love
you more
then I can
ever tell you
I hope I
show you
with more
then I potray.


copyright
kelly cantu
9-15-2004

sylvanlightning
09-21-2004, 11:31 PM
The essence of this piece was very beautiful.
I stumbled a bit over some small spelling mistakes and that it
was dedicated to a certain person... but that is just me.
Thank you for sharing this very intimate and passionate work.

fulmah
09-21-2004, 11:38 PM
And, oh those
blissful moments
when your
flesh touches
mine, deep inside
I can always
feel my inner
tissues wrapped
around yours
Just knowing
how your blood
is rushing
through you
makes me
constrict my
pleasure.

Mmmmm.... gettin me riled up... thanks for sharing this!

gdhmomchild
09-22-2004, 05:29 AM
I loved the piece but wasn't crazy for the layout of it. Made it a bit hard to read. Thanks~*