i see

[linda angus]

i see in you all eternities
of futures you've built from your pasts;
a soul alight with intensity-
but,can you make it last?
i see in you all i love and hate,
you're emotions run fire to ice.
there's still so much expected in life
and you hate the sacrifice.
i see in you all that's good
but evil lrks just inside...
you burn your candle bright to cleanse
the places where your shadows hide
i see in you all that i condemn..
i see all that i hold dear;
but you and i see eye to eye...
as i gaze into my mirror

[kidder]

The last four lines crackle! If you can make the whole piece work with the same power as the ending you'll be one of the best I've seen on here.

[gdhmomchild]

very well done. yeah, it doesnt do much good to look at ourselves unless we look at all aspects of who we are. thanks~*

[balko]

That is really good. I like the ending, it's true...