'Not so bad' is not a compliment

[*electrica*]

One line is all that's holding me to you
One line that means nothing
A gold band is all that's holding me to life
A gold band I bought for myself
So what if my hair is pretty?
Who cares if my eyes are gray?
I still have the scars marring the view
You didn't think they'd be so prominent?
'Not so bad' isn't a compliment, you know
And your pen makes me feel stupid
Thankfully your art is atrocious

[fulmah]

This is utterly fantastic... dark, sarcastic and pissed off; my favorite!

[*electrica*]

Thanks. I wasn't sure if the anger would come across ;)

[sylvanlightning]

http://hipforums.com/forums/showpost.php?p=273916&postcount=8

Golden bands, golden chains, golden lake slow undulating ripples of honey.