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Blkrubbersoul
06-05-2008, 01:44 AM
a
trained eye
can see bias
even in an ant hill.

among the shareholders
of faith and knowledge;
this is where
the procreation of progress
is dominant.
ominous gesundheits
handed out like social ornaments;
the sun sets
begging for a lesser involvement.

religion: decision,
revision of your faith;
intermission.
a mission, a vision,
a wish upon a star
for a listen.
a fallen
rendition of the
failures to mention
exactly where the rope ends,
and your neck
becomes the tension...

"opiate for the people"
is a copout.
"lazy" would be more
appropriate.

The Instinct
06-09-2008, 04:36 AM
flows pretty nice. I read this once before too, but I guess that's why you have to go back and read some again. Moods change all the time and sometimes you come across some that are just fitting. Anway, I like it, good job.