Nostalgy

[Pellinore]

I wrote this yesterday night, yet again, like the previous poem i posted here it is just a emotional reflection, the words are just a stream of thougts. My english vocabulary isn't that great but i tried to reflect this feeling of nostalgy i had.

Nostalgy

Laying in my bed,
Memories of childhood,
Lost ignorance,
A lost treasure.

The days passing by,
Untouched.
A loss of memory,
A loss of awareness.
A feeling, vague,
dominating vagueness.
Endless.

A laugh of evil,
Tormenting me,
Breaking my mind,
In a thousand pieces.

Everything is just a,
mere reflection of the past.
What a joke,
It is all a joke.

A slave of the waves and tides,
we call society.

I quit, no more nostalgy.
A one way ticket to the moon,
Farewell.

[Vetty214]

What is your language? Italian? I would like to see this in your native tongue if you originally wrote it in Italian... I don't know Italian but have read some translated Italian poetry.

This is pretty good! I enjoyed the first stanza very, very much... and your description of society... as slaves to waves and tides.

[Freakymetalchik]

i really like this.
it conveys your feeling pretty well, i think.
<3