Fuck You. I'm Leaving.

[Po'It.]

Fuck You, I'm Leaving.

I'm tired of...

Waking up at 6 and fighting ...all the rules binding
Can't get my mind right from minding, it's blinding
A sight to start sighting, though ... I always follow
Only me walking down, those hallways so hollow
Loading up the A-K, fuck it, I'm losing my breath
Up every mourning, smelling the stench of death
Those emails my wife sent, all gone to old news
Sick of hearing ...how she's with all my old dudes
Here to serve and protect, but what are we serving?
Taking over a country ... thats just so undesevering
I miss my home, my mother, my girl, I cant stand it
Where are we going with this plane? Fuck you, land it
I've had it, be loyal to friends? You're all just loosers
We the centre of the world or just bullies an abusers?
Yeah, it was a bad experiance, give me a hand to fall
Are you going to appluad a man who can't stand at all?
So what do we want? Nothing, we only ask for our needs
Such a leader you are, request the only task is to bleed
So, I'm leaving, the army, the country, and don't push
Because I've seen what you're about, n' fuck you Bush



Not sure what kind of writing this fits, some call it " hip hop poetry" Because it's NOT rap.

[little ski]

hey Po'It, i really liked this!! wasn't sure at the begining coz like you say it's sort of 'hip hop' style poetry, which isn't usually my thing but really got into it by the end. nice work. :)

[Po'It.]

Thanks alot girl.

Send me a link if you drop any poems and I'll leave you soe feedback/

[Freakymetalchik]

this is really good.
and not only is it good,
but it actually means something.
well done.
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