Evaporation

[Bhaskar]

I have torn the books into raindrops
in my starving madness.
As I stand in the tattered drizzle,
I am soaked in the beloved.
Warm and dry in your mosque,
how can you know
why Latif dances
in the sacred puddles.

[SvgGrdnBeauty]

lol...this one is def. totally Sufi. :) I love the imagery of the rain and being soaked in divine presence and sacred puddles... ripping up literary binds for the freedom of divine experience... I totally feel this one. :)

[redyelruc]

Wow. This is quite brilliant. Looking forward to more.

Nice job.