The blue arrows of past

[art_hippie]

Hey you there...
can you see those blue arrows crossing the sky
Can you see them?
Tell me please
maybe you used to love me
maybe you ll remember me
Can you see them?
Do you want to escape with me?
We ll run down this hill all night long
We ll sing our favorite song
We ll talk for hours and hours
like we used to do
Do you remeber?
Summertime is gone
I know its sad...
i know
you are cold inside
or maybe you are not.
I know you still remeber
I know you can see those blue arrows.

[blackheartbitch]

kind of had a happy feeling in the beginning and then as it went on got melancholy. I sensed a feeling of hurt and loss in it...maybe a lost love or a lost family member. well written. i like your style.

may peace and love find you
Amber

[art_hippie]

thak you blackheartbitch
yes its a kind of lots love
u are right:}:}:}
lots of sunny smiles
Nadia

[groovecookie]

Powerful magic, sister. The blue arrows are so direct on a feeling level, you know, I mean, the meaning is all in the feeling....at least for me. Anyway, it's really beautiful.
I couldn't stop thinking about it after I read it. To me the blue arrows sort of represent the passing of time. But that's just how I experience it.