Our Chance

[blackheartbitch]

all comments and critisism welcomed.


OUR CHANCE
Our chance for greatness is upon us,
staring us in the face telling of the future,
showing that all is meant to be as it is right now,
showing that through the pain and trials of our lives
in the end we found our happiness in each other.
through the touch of our hands and the combining of our lips
we found the truth that was meant to be,
even though we already knew we would end up this way,
from the very beginning we knew somehow that we’d be together.

My darling did you feel it the first times our eyes met?
Did you invision us to be?
Well I did and now that we are here
making my dreams into reality
all that is left to do is to say
that love is real and we cant escape it,
our emotions are poured out like blood from a cut
but this is different love is not like pain it is not like hurting
it is a feeling of such great maltitude that we feel so much,
so much beauty that it feels like pain.

[art_hippie]

it is a feeling of such great maltitude that we feel so much,
so much beauty that it feels like pain


i liek this phrase:}:}:}

keep on writing:}:}:}

lots of sunny smiles
peace
Nadia

[blackheartbitch]

^ thanks. may peace and love find you.

[senzgirl]

I really liked the ay you expressed your love here..it's a difficult feeling to put to words and you chose the perfect words to envision your feelings.

[blackheartbitch]

thank you. yes expressing love can be quite difficult...ive personally never written much about love but this one came quite easily

[MrCoolGuy69]

very good BlackHeartBitch. whatever's inspiring you to write this, keep it

[blackheartbitch]

mrcoolguy i plan to.