not sure what to call it.

[Freakymetalchik]

not really sure of a title, suggestions welcome, comments welcome.


its just another day of reality
i close my eyes to escape it
the bright lights flash
a million tiny colors
push my fingers into my eyes
it doesn't help now
not anymore

it seems the more i try to fix things
they only get worse
a million pins and needles
stuck into my face
i really dont mind
just let the blood run down
like tears, only sweeter

fix me
solve my problems
heal my pain
words ive heard a million times
promised, but never done
why do i keep expecting more
but why do they keep asking me
maybe im done
maybe all of this
was all i had to give?

[heywood floyd]

I think you should call it 'don't fuck with me or I'll kill myself'.

[Freakymetalchik]

ok. i have no intention of killing my self, by the way...

[groovecookie]

That hit a nerve. definately felt that one.

[blackheartbitch]

i like the title..."forget being fixed" lol but thats my suggestion.
i really like this poem...you know it hit a soft spot with me. im guessing you broke the writers block?

oh and heywood...dont be so quick to judge people...just because they write something like this doesnt mean they want to kill themselves.

[poopzilla33]

^ some people on here are just mean for the sake of being mean, best to just not listen to 'em

[Freakymetalchik]

thanks guys
glad you liked it.
:)