View Full Version : Clouds
Vetty214
09-05-2007, 03:41 AM
Boundless sky
their earth
the wind
their emotion
and like us
independent
spirits
crossing paths
and do they look
to us
as their heavens
and if so
do they cry?
poopzilla33
09-05-2007, 05:34 AM
good job my friend, i enjoyed it
redyelruc
09-05-2007, 01:11 PM
Simple and to the point. I like it a lot. I'm sure they cry, I know I do.
Peace,
A.
art_hippie
09-05-2007, 07:37 PM
yeah they cry,with little drops:]
zilla939
09-05-2007, 09:36 PM
beautiful parallels... i love the ending question with such an obvious answer.
Vetty214
09-06-2007, 12:50 PM
Thanks for the nice words, I'm glad you liked it. Have a beautiful September all! Vetty
vBulletin® v3.8.2, Copyright ©2000-2009, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.