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mr_alleycat
08-29-2007, 03:53 AM
Fragile is the mirror
Our psyche hides behind
Reflecting our delusions
From fear of what we find

Still we are just the child
Shaken and alone
When brought out in the open
Outside our comfort zone

Confusion is a constant
The measure of all things
With the flooding of emotions
Our shattered mirror brings

Things that lay hidden
In recesses of the mind
Come out to rule the moment
Future thoughts aside

Lashing out at loved ones
Meaning no offense
Sharpness of the tongue
A spiritual defense

Sweeping up the pieces
Saving every one
Rebuilding our delusions
A battle yet begun

Puzzling the pieces
From the many shards
Glue of understanding
Reducing many scars

Buffing it with love
Makes it shinny new
To find that little child
You’d need a jeweler's view

When it’s all together
We say that we have grown
Our mirror shining brightly
With delusions all our own





mr_alleycat

hoperenefeese
08-29-2007, 05:48 AM
this is great! Your writing makes you feel you are that peson looking in the mirror.
it is what is in your soul, and i love it, keep it up!

Freakymetalchik
08-29-2007, 01:47 PM
Beautiful poem! :)

blackheartbitch
08-31-2007, 12:34 AM
beautiful. i love it. i love the way you write.

redyelruc
09-02-2007, 07:56 PM
The more I see from the alleycat, the more I like.

Good stuff.

Malapascua
09-04-2007, 07:46 PM
The more I see from the alleycat, the more I like.

Good stuff.

DITTO