She Stands Alone

[Gothika]

she stands alone
everyone who claimed to love her
has abandoned her
to live her life out alone
every day a fresh new hell
trapped inside
no one notices
and no one cares
what she does to herself
no way in, no way out
she doesnt know what to do
shes being used
shes being hurt
her soul is being shattered

she needs help
but no one will take the time
out of their busy lives
and help her
no one cares enough to stop
to pause their happy lives
filled with money and friends and happiness
and help her out of her hell
no one notices
and no one cares
what she does to herself
she struggles on
through the words
through the pain
and tries to stop feeling

she cuts thinking it would help
it doesnt but she cant stop
the violent cycle repeats
scars fading but they just reappear
no one notices
and no one cares
what she does to herself
its kept a secret
she trusts few and doesnt smile
shes stuck in this wasteland
wondering what to do

she reaches in herself
uses her core, her inner strength
manages to stop cutting
the scars fade and dont reappear
turns up the music and smokes more drugs
no one notices
and no one cares
what she does to herself
wasted, let down, abused, hurt,
and nowhere to turn to stop it
she stands alone

[Freakymetalchik]

I am not thrilled with you as a person............................................ ......
Good write.
But don't think the fact that you can write makes me less mad at you!

[children of korn]

awesome poem

[blackheartbitch]

awesome poem.

[The Instinct]

great poem!

[Vetty214]

I liked this.... immediately felt pulled in. I had a draft of a dark poem and reworked it to add some imagery and it got better. You might play off the "hell" and "wasteland" themes and see if you can work in some imagery. I typically write very dark too and hope that this is pulling from the creative side in you and not too much from your reality. Thanks for sharing... great work.

[myself]

kind of morbid, but... i really like it!