VegOut024
08-21-2007, 09:45 AM
Hey, everyone. i thought just share a little somothing I wrote:)
Let Out
Lying on a mystic shore where
gold drips from the sand
Where the sun seems to smile
On the Calm and peaceful land
I sense a calm, a sort wave
I cannot hear or see
Flood into my open mind
Leaving hope washed over me
The storm clouds have drifted off
Into the closets of the sky
The rain has left its gentle dew
And now has said good bye
The hills seem filled with green suprises
That whisper in me ear
Come and climb my tallest peak
And leave behind your fears
No beep, or humm, no not a sound
Comes forth from man’s machines
Nature here is on ubstructed
Quite and serene
And as the golden sun falls down
And hides quietly form sight
The shy is filled with bands of red
That call upon the night
The moon is silhouetted on the
Blue canvas of sky
Soon its light will shine so bright
Like fireflies on high
I thought I heard the mockingbird
Whisper through its wings
Come with me to far off places
Come to better things
I tried to go but as I stood
Upon the waters edge
I looked back at the city streets
And said, "I’m here until the end"
I cannot leave this concrete cell
This ever shrinking cage
It brings happiness to some
But It drives me into rage
The pathetic neon glow
From the lying corporate signs
Will never reach the brilliance
Of natures grand design
And If I make it to the highest hill
I’ll turn around and shout
Enjoy your shrinking concrete cage,
For I have been let out
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Let Out
Lying on a mystic shore where
gold drips from the sand
Where the sun seems to smile
On the Calm and peaceful land
I sense a calm, a sort wave
I cannot hear or see
Flood into my open mind
Leaving hope washed over me
The storm clouds have drifted off
Into the closets of the sky
The rain has left its gentle dew
And now has said good bye
The hills seem filled with green suprises
That whisper in me ear
Come and climb my tallest peak
And leave behind your fears
No beep, or humm, no not a sound
Comes forth from man’s machines
Nature here is on ubstructed
Quite and serene
And as the golden sun falls down
And hides quietly form sight
The shy is filled with bands of red
That call upon the night
The moon is silhouetted on the
Blue canvas of sky
Soon its light will shine so bright
Like fireflies on high
I thought I heard the mockingbird
Whisper through its wings
Come with me to far off places
Come to better things
I tried to go but as I stood
Upon the waters edge
I looked back at the city streets
And said, "I’m here until the end"
I cannot leave this concrete cell
This ever shrinking cage
It brings happiness to some
But It drives me into rage
The pathetic neon glow
From the lying corporate signs
Will never reach the brilliance
Of natures grand design
And If I make it to the highest hill
I’ll turn around and shout
Enjoy your shrinking concrete cage,
For I have been let out
Leave feedback here. if its bad say it. It would offend me more for you to not give me the critique I'm asking for then, just say its good so you dont hurt my feelings