Love.

[Mr. Mojo Risin']

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[floydianslip6]

changing:
But what I'd really like to see
is my dick in your mouth.

to:
But what I'd really like to see
is my dick inside your mouth.

would keep consistant pace for syllables.

[Mr. Mojo Risin']

You're right, thanks.

[FortunateSon]

Sweet poem, dude!

[Ganja_Goo_Ninja]

Immaculate.

If I ever get drugged, beaten and forced to marry someone.. you, sir, are writing the wedding vows.

[Musikero]

LMAO! :lol: I'd like you to write the speech for the best man to say in my wedding. On second thought, the bride would probably kill you...

[Mr. Mojo Risin']

Thanks, guys! http://www.hipforums.com/forums/images/newsmilies/biggrinjester.gif

[hippyhappy]

Ya from a girls perspective, is this what the insight into a guys mind is like?! Its witty. I love the romanticised lines at the start of the verse and then it gets down to what you really mean in animalistic terms. It was great! I liked it.

[Freakymetalchik]

Lololololololol really nice poem there!

[Mr. Mojo Risin']

Thanks, gals! I appreciate it. :)

[blackheartbitch]

hehehe nice poem there hun