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The Instinct
07-13-2007, 01:43 AM
This is the other side to "She" that I wrote about a year later. Again, all thoughts/comments/replies are welcome. Enjoy.


He is a person who has burning passion for her love
A person who cherishes every moment they will have
He longs for the day that she will come into his life
A day he will always remember from deep within

He will remember the day she said she loves him
He'll take it to heart and never let it go
A heart that has been closed until she came along
From all the hurt that's been brought upon him

Somewhere he knows that she exists
He can't give up until he finds her
He'll never know when or how but beyond the mountains he travels
Climbing through rocky territories of lies and games

There have been many times where he's turned his back
Only on one's who used him for what he was worth
They always told him they loved him, but he knew the truth
He knew that a special someone was out there for him

He looks for a look in her eyes so deep that only he knows
It's a feeling of comfort, security, but that wouldn't even describe it
The word of love that's inside is unmatched to how he feels
He dreams about her only to wake up with empty arm's

He has thought he's seen her on many occasions
He has even talked to her and tried to charm her
Only to hear a lie or fall into someone else's arm's
Often wondering why it didn't work out

Time always moves on and so does he
Finding himself in a lonely reality
That man here is me, it is you
He can't understand life without her, there wouldn't be life

He wonders where to go and what to do
Often questioning if some are "the one"
He'll never know until the day they meet
They will look into each other's eyes and be in love forever

c. 2001

blackheartbitch
07-14-2007, 02:24 AM
i voted "dont know" but this poem is really good...it made me tear up actually...made me think about some things that ive done to the people i claim to love

Freakymetalchik
07-18-2007, 05:27 PM
its a beautiful poem...very sad...

jim kirby
07-24-2007, 09:09 PM
the yearning for and the search for true life is as old as time itself ... your words have been spoken and written a million times in one form or another. you're still a young man with plenty of time left to find the love of your life ... a soul mate who will love and want you for you and for no other reason. keep looking dude and don't be impatient ... when it comes you'll know it dude.

The Instinct
07-25-2007, 01:42 AM
This was just my version, I know, I've heard the same words a million times myself...and the rest of it...I've come to care less whether their is a soul mate or a perfect one for me. Love is just one out of a million things in life.