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The Instinct
07-13-2007, 01:32 AM
Again, another poem of another time in less evil times, something of hope, something of love. Again, all replies, comments are very welcome. Enjoy.


She is a person many long for
A person to hold, a person to lean on
She is a person to talk to when needed
A friend who is as close as they come

She is a person who you can trust
She'll give you a special look everyday
A look that doesn't describe lies or a game
It's a look that you know will always be there

She is a person who listens and knows what's right
She'll tell you to go off and do what you enjoy
There will be no hard feelings because she's always there
She won't hurt you, She won't steal from you

She is a person who could be anybody
Anybody from a past girlfriend to someone you've never met
Even a neighbor to someone you created in your mind
You'll make the decision when the time is right

She is a person who appreciates the thoughts you tell
She'll never steer you wrong or put you in a position
She has a heart that never stops giving the love you need
You'll appreciate who she is for who she is without a second thought

She is a person, not just a word on paper
She is a person you can describe, which many things can't be
She is a person that's been put into shape and figure
A song that doesn't need words because the feeling is already there

Many call this feeling a wife
Many have called it love
I ask myself how I can write about such a person
My only answer is that She might come to me in time

She is a being I want in my life,
Without feeling guilt or sorrow that I met her.
She was never "out of my league", She was always in it.
She is a thought I can sometimes picture in my imagination...

She may have cried at nights wanting someone of the same
You may have climbed many mountains and more to find her
All you can do is hope and wait that she'll come along someday

c. 2000

hoperenefeese
07-13-2007, 09:16 AM
One word, WOW, that is A PERFECT esample of pouring your heart and soul out on paper, and not needing it to ryhm, cause it is from your heart,
awsome...very awsome

myself
07-13-2007, 12:24 PM
about a person meant for me, a soul mate: i don't know...

children of korn
07-13-2007, 11:28 PM
i voted yes......great poem

deram_scholzara
07-14-2007, 12:40 AM
"She is a person who could be anybody
Anybody from a past girlfriend to someone you've never met
Even a neighbor to someone you created in your mind
You'll make the decision when the time is right"

That is my favorite stanza, I love it. I like that you even cover the idea that this perfect match might only exist in your imagination, yet they still exist.

blackheartbitch
07-14-2007, 02:19 AM
OH WOW this is truly amazing

The Instinct
07-18-2007, 12:25 AM
thank you all.

Freakymetalchik
07-18-2007, 04:54 PM
about having a soul mate, i don't know. i hope so. but that is a beautiful poem! i absolutely love it! :)