Another Night

[scruuuub]

Another Night

Another night of subtle slumber
your words have adopted my thoughts
speaking but i don't understand
wild images scattered in my mind


In awakeness i still stop to think
giving away what you can't get back
my friend , you'll end up in tears
please don't make me feel blue


wait for love that's true

[AddictiveSmile]

I liked this piece. I agree with what your saying here. It takes time for love. Keep writing hun! -Cassi

[Autentique]

ohh wow...

i read this and likes it specially the first verse and then i saw your age and was impressed. Keep writing.

[scruuuub]

thank you for the lovely feedback =] impressed by my age ? well i guess its my lifestyle , all i do is write music and poetry all day and sometimes i like to paint or draw. Even in school i don't really like many subjects other than english , music and art (although i'm quite fond of history) and put all my effort into those subjects , and i'll never stop , i love music , poetry and art so much !

peace

[blackheartbitch]

thats really good

[sunshine_daydream07]

very good.

this is my favorite one i've read from you yet!:H

[sunshine_daydream07]

oops sorry..the same comment posted twice.

[Autentique]

thank you for the lovely feedback =] impressed by my age ? well i guess its my lifestyle , all i do is write music and poetry all day and sometimes i like to paint or draw. Even in school i don't really like many subjects other than english , music and art (although i'm quite fond of history) and put all my effort into those subjects , and i'll never stop , i love music , poetry and art so much !

peacesounds like me in school.

:)