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Headlight_ona_train
07-12-2007, 02:11 PM
Take me to the sea

Where the waves roll softly onto the shore

Take me to the sea

Where the birds dance on the wind

Take me to the sea

Where the air smells of salt and blows cool

Take me to the sea

Where the sun is swallowed by water

Take me to the sea

With my friend beside me

Take me to the sea

Where we can kiss on the sand under a big old moon

Take me to the sea

The Instinct
07-26-2007, 09:15 PM
very sweet and innocent, I like it.

redyelruc
07-27-2007, 10:01 AM
It made me very melancholic. Somebody please come and take me to the sea. After living most of my life within reach of a beach, I'm now 9 hours by bus from the closest salt water.


Nice.......

Peace,
Aidan

hippyhappy
07-27-2007, 01:09 PM
That was beautiful. So simple. I want to go the beach now with the one I love. It captures the magical place that the sea is. No matter what beach you go to, you always get that sense of freedom and excitement, that the possibilities are endless near the sea, the world's end. Really great! I'm going to go to the beah now and think of that poem!

Freakymetalchik
07-27-2007, 02:38 PM
i like that poem! i wish i was near a beach lol!