unavoidable,again

[dancingcrazystoned]

to be alone

surrounded by him,not feeling a thing
not feeling anything

presented on a platter turned away
so quickly, before an opinion was ever given,
a chance was ever recived

to bear so nakedly, stark with truth
a foul creation swept into her crevasse
to forever be present
but never be there


[i dont know.i write when i feel sad when i cnat sayt hte things i want to say to the preson i so despratly want to say them to.i always write then read later and feel i've written corny hopeless shit.so this is off the top of my head, tell me whatyou think.please]

[hoperenefeese]

i like it , it show's what you are feeling at the time in your soul
the best work is when you have true feelin's about whatver
and you write them down on paper. those are alway's my best peices

[dancingcrazystoned]

thanks mate..yeh its when you feel stuff...its the constructive way to get it out.and i've never shown them to someone so maybe the net is a good medium to express them??