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AddictiveSmile
07-11-2007, 05:18 AM
I've been writing poetry since I was able to read and write. I had stopped for a few years. I guess it was writers block or even being too busy. I have started writing again not too long ago. Here's a piece I wrote a few months ago. I will post more soon! Enjoy!


Where Dreams Are Born

I miss you when twilight slips away
as footsteps hush the magic of moonlight,
and fantasy is forgotten in falling leaves


You are the only light in these hazel green eyes,

coming to comfort in roses red,
flourishing in passionate petals,
stem stirs, silencing the stream;

Hearts hibernating, sigh in serenade
of whispering wind
When doves pair in flight
to envy our passionate storm.


There are moments
where thoughts linger,
of lips longing to taste
fragrances of love

Beckoning your breath
nestled in nectar, nurturing
kisses cascading softly

over glistening buds,
blossoming...

Gliding in poetic rhythm,
igniting emotions embers,
surrendering to serenity's calling


when seconds melt into hours
in quiet contempt of awakening
from desire that finds us
in caress

when dreams collide.

scruuuub
07-11-2007, 07:22 PM
wow ! very good ! i love it =]

hoperenefeese
07-12-2007, 03:57 AM
love it, very nice

Headlight_ona_train
07-12-2007, 02:30 PM
you got some real talent
i like your images and words
very nice...

thcinfectedhair
07-13-2007, 04:46 PM
wow that was amazing, i loved how you used so many words that were very descriptive. lots of immagery and metaphors!

jim kirby
07-17-2007, 06:59 PM
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