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brertom
05-30-2007, 10:54 PM
Drinking some juice

After another long day.

I sat there pondering

Maybe some girl

Is sitting at home

Wondering where I am.

It was 1:10

And I'm home

Before the rest of them.

They're stuck in a prison

Filled with manipulation

Day in, day out.

My dog laid beside me

Dreaming about

ferociously playing with me.

The air was so warm

And covered with mist.

The sun seeped through

My mother's perfectly

Picked out shades.

Dark clouds hid

In the distance away

From the summer's

Lazy afternoon.

The freshly cut grass

Glistened straight into

our minty green room.

The T.V. was on but

Only for background noise.

The cicada's sang their

Songs as a dragonfly

Buzzed on by.

SweetMarie
05-31-2007, 04:28 PM
I really liked this, I could actually feel the day.

brertom
05-31-2007, 05:24 PM
thanks fellow chicagoan!