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SweetMarie
05-28-2007, 09:09 PM
The sun is crying.
Dripping fire-
Melting time.

Creating puddles of life around us.

We all jump in,
Burn our skin,
But start to swim....

Quickly in circles,
Gasping for air,
Breathing in Hate,
And choking on Fear,
Tomorrow is painless,
Until it is here,
It's always tomorrow-
The answers are there.

But, yesterday's Future,
Today's always the same.

The sun is still sobbing,
And so, the fire remains.

VanAstral
05-29-2007, 06:23 AM
party all night and sleep all day... nice flow!

Miss_Beatle
05-29-2007, 07:22 AM
I like it, cool poem :)

thcinfectedhair
05-29-2007, 03:56 PM
push things off for tomorrow, always tomorrow indeed man. tight shit

SweetMarie
05-29-2007, 04:01 PM
Thanks, all-I appreciate it!