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Charlotte84
05-28-2007, 01:33 PM
We'll argue tonight

but not for long

he knows his touch

can heal whats wrong.



We'll get all hot

a little less tight

the last thing I'll remember

will not be this fight



For my passion will still

encourage him till

I am broken and bruised

in love and confused



Skin touching skin

lips touching lips

he will melt himself

between my hips



Then i'll be left there lying

indulged and flying

exhausted but,

no longer crying

-Charli

Malapascua
08-08-2007, 07:46 PM
Call it Make up sex.

blackheartbitch
08-08-2007, 10:33 PM
^ i agree. MAKE UP SEX is the perfect name for this

just_poetic
08-09-2007, 03:36 AM
this was nice and the name they specified above fits perfectly

redyelruc
08-09-2007, 10:08 AM
I am broken and bruised

in love and confused



Skin touching skin

lips touching lips

he will melt himself

between my hips



Then i'll be left there lying

indulged and flying

exhausted but,

no longer crying

-Charli
I tried to pick a line or two that I like more than the rest and ended up with 60% of the poem. Melting himself between you hips is a wonderful image and describing post-coital bliss as indulged and flying is fucking spot on. I really like this poem. As for the title, I'm not sure. You haven't had the fight yet, but know what is going to happen so maybe, Lustful Resignation.

Anyway, thanks for the opportunity of reading, please keep posting.

Peace,
Aidan