A longer poem...

[-Bev-]

I'm really not sure about this one.. but please comment and tell me what you think anyways :]

Rainy Spring days
Melted into a haze
A drizzle of thrills
Splashed with puddles of hope.
Awash with your apathy
Me, flooded with fear
Frozen words on my tongue
Couldn't speak,
It was clear.
Drenched in this love
That had seized me so fast
Memories of moments
I longed for to last.
My heart would stop beating
One look from those eyes
A rainbow of emotion
Beneath dull grey skies.
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Purple clouds, Summer nights
Blurred happiness, tears
Hazy dreams, hopeful words
Sweet music to ears
Confusion, cruel games
'Til my heart would break
Never could know
What was real, what was fake.
The sunshine faded
All hope washed away
Too late, spoke the words
I'd always wanted to say.
Cloudburst of hurt,
Torrent of pain
And one look from those eyes
Brings it all back again.

[Riggs]

That was good.

[Lorna]

Oh God! this poem is so much real for me, so much echoing in me, it is what i feel.

So good to hear, so good to read and feel.

Very good bev.

[VanAstral]

I agree with Mel Gibson!

[Miss_Beatle]

I like it a lot!! Good job =]

[-Bev-]

Thanks!