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peacefulrevolution
05-24-2007, 10:00 AM
Do you really love me?

I'm sitting in despair

Dying from your oppression

And I don't think you care




yeah i wrote this the other night after i got in a fight with my dad.

i want him to understand, but he's such a square.

Miss_Beatle
05-24-2007, 03:50 PM
Short, but obviously very meaningful. I like it. =]

thcinfectedhair
05-26-2007, 11:15 PM
weve all been there bro. this is probly the only poem ive seen get away with such small description and small amount of...words and still be good.
word my man