Couple of things I wrote. Comment please?

[-Bev-]

Locked Inside
She turns, twists hair,
In frustration, sighs
Head in hands, with ink,
She tries
To free what's inside
On to paper
The essence of her soul,
what shapes her.

Surfing the Soundwaves...
Surfing the soundwaves
In a maze of melody
In a turmoil of tune
With a rhythm of ruin.
With a landslide of lyrics
And a bassline of bliss
I drift in the music
As it leaves its sweet kiss.

Hopeful Lies
Hazy Sunshine
Pink Skies
Broken Looks
Dreamy Eyes
Rainy Streets
Haunting Dreams
Dizzy Fears
Hopeful Lies

[Miss_Beatle]

I like them all =]
I really like surfing the soundwaves, that one's really good.

[-Bev-]

thanks! :]

[shovel250]

surfing the soundwaves is the best one,the other ones r really good too

[brertom]

soundwaves one is sick

[-Bev-]

sick as in good.. i hope.. ? :P
thanks guys.

[A.B.E.]

I really like your style, and liked all three, especially the first two. You have a good pace to your lines, and they are good to read aloud. They seem very personal and thoughtful. Yeah ! Good work! Makes me want to write more poetry, it really puts me in a mood.