Another spontanious poem

[SoFarAway]

Another poem off the top of my head..


black, engulfing tides, choke me once, who am I?
Lost in some perception of truth, in the house of ill repute.
My vision is so cloudy these days, troubles seem to haunt me.
Sickness non-existant because it's all the time.
And always with this bad habit of rhyme.
But what I know is what I see, and who I am, is how I be.
Me, for what is me, for who I am and what I see.
And if you shalt never catch a glimpse, then I am happy,
Because, I don't really want you to know me as much as I want you...

To hear me.

[sylvanlightning]

But what I know is what I see, and who I am, is how I be.


I heard this line loud and clear.

[logans hippy]

that poem was so wonderful.....i can't believe how you described it.....i wish one day i could be as good as you are.

[SoFarAway]

Thank you very much, I appreciate it.

[fulmah]

I liked this alot as well. Strong words, strong statements. And off the top of your head... magnificent!

[SoFarAway]

Again, thank you. I do appreciate it.

[SoFarAway]

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