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LuciferSam
08-13-2004, 06:02 AM
Ahem......

"A Probably Faulty Haiku"

by Bacardi Gold:p

When brain cells die
the spirit will fly
and smack its head on the ceiling

osiris
08-13-2004, 06:43 PM
haha! yes, i think you would have better luck counting the dead brain cells than the syllables!

much love :)

KittenX
08-13-2004, 07:02 PM
Silly -haiku-. Enjoyed :)

sylvanlightning
08-15-2004, 07:19 AM
Thanks for sharing. You wrote your Haiku on my birthday. :)

sunflowerAlys
08-16-2004, 10:00 PM
woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooohoooooooooo ooooooooooooooooo
for bad haiku
mine would be worse!!!


havnt been here for aaaaages. how ya all doing crazy peeps

inbloom
08-18-2004, 08:51 AM
hehehe, it's good, i like it! it's simple and fun. :)