Rebirth

[RiversClearwater]

the lines sort of just went through my head after an amazing trip

Rebirth



Oh Angel of angles,

may your guiding knowledge

forever rain upon me.

May I shed this chrysalis

and clean the dirt from within my eyes,

and may I always remember

it’s fucking beautiful to be,

alive.


The Re-visitation of Earth



With each new spring comes new life,

a life I wish to taste.

I want to drink

to drink my friends,

to drink the elixir of life.

And may this moon and may these stars

bare witness as I take this earth as my wife.

And should I cry,

For I surely will cry,

She’ll always give a place for my head to lie.

And when I bleed,

for I surely will bleed

It will be her sweet embrace indeed,

that will be all I need.

And when the time has come

for me to move on,

I will do so with a stoic face,

for I’ll always know I can return to this place.

And when I am hurt

Or feeling alone,

I will transcend

and once again

Re-visit this place I called home.



dunno =) I like em anyhow

[sentient]

fantastic - now all you need is a catchy tune - I suggest you record it to the tune of "We Are The Cheeky Girls" by The Cheeky Girls

and throw in some samples of of Grandmaster-Flash and a few Bee-Gees samples -

Then to make it just perfect - dig a hole in the garden - 12 ft deep and bury the recording there and forget all about it for the rest of youyr life and try to get skip to delete this thread - it will only come back to haunt you when you are about 40 years old

[RiversClearwater]

haunt? lol I don't think so...maybe if they were sappy love writings to an alcoholic bitch that walked all over me yet I beckoned to her every call...then and MAYBE ONLY then sure

[sentient]

And may this moon and may these stars
bare witness as I take this earth as my wife.
And should I cry,I could have said "I rest my case" after a quote like that but as your answer was plausible - and you were tripped out of your face - I spare you the edginess of my literary critique - and will look forward to a next trippy installment

Instead I suggest that you write a song in the style of Benny Hill's "Ernie" the fastest milkman in the west - next time