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shaba
03-02-2007, 01:14 AM
Tall tales wash away
The short stories never stick
I've searched for the truth
But all I found was this.
My mind has gone
My heart disappeared
I'm looking with my eyes
And found it with my ears
All I was, had never been
Every step forward
Can't be seen.
The only footprints left behind
Have been washed by the sea
The only trace of my life
Is six feet deep.

Malapascua
03-02-2007, 12:04 PM
Dude, that seems to be the fear of many people.
To leave no legacy behind.
Very nice piece.

dragonangelbiker
03-02-2007, 05:20 PM
awesome piece of work. keep writing. i look forward to reading more

shaba
03-04-2007, 08:20 PM
thanks guys. I'm glad other people can relate.

hopefaithlove
03-04-2007, 09:49 PM
that was so cool man!!!! ur a great writer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!