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Jack Maundrell
03-01-2007, 08:11 PM
my mind wanders away dreaming of her
that female I used to know
I see her through the glass screen
wondering if we could ever be
together or no
we used to laugh about objects full of death
and meaning
still she laughs while I leave
behind to journey
moving onward toward destruction and
eventually recreation to find another
but nothing compares to the female I wonder

Jack Maundrell
03-03-2007, 09:38 AM
What's with the lack of comments?

Spiderweb Sitar
03-04-2007, 04:10 AM
I really like it! It's very heartfelt and "real."