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las puertas
02-28-2007, 11:10 PM
we see each other no longer
seperate people on different paths for us to wander
that fire in my eyes has burned out
what once sparked our beinging has lead to our ending
i wanted to be yours 4ever but you didnt let me
we pass each other moving on to our different journeys that behold us
i guess i knew all along we would be apart cause i never truly was the 1 in your heart

hippie_chick666
02-28-2007, 11:34 PM
Very sad and pretty. I can totally relate to what you are saying!

Peace and love

Malapascua
03-01-2007, 12:01 PM
Very nice, tender, and painful.

dragonangelbiker
03-01-2007, 04:00 PM
very well put, sounds painful. keep on writing

hopefaithlove
03-03-2007, 09:28 PM
ur a good writer

las puertas
03-07-2007, 06:05 PM
thanks 4 your comments!